progress (A39)

 version 1

I can't draw their legs well.
Also I don't like neither of their expressions on the last panel. Looking creepy.

I feel there are too many eating scenes of them in my comic.
In real life, I don't like eating. I find eating very painful.

I absolutely can't relate to Pompo chan these days although he was my self insertion when I first made him.
Also all of his positive traits like being jolly and caring don't apply to me so it's getting harder for me to understand him or come up with his lines.

But somehow those two just having fun makes me feel a little warm inside. So I wanna continue as far as I can.

version 2

version 3




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