Progress (B1 - B5)

 



I wanna change the last panel on this one... I gotta edit later. 


I think the glasses look too flat. I assume it's because they're the same color with the line art... I can add thin lines to avoid it but in that case, I'm supposed to change the color of his glasses too.



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